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Good ch 1 start! Action in the beginning is always wise imho.
Exactly what I thought--what was that? :) Nice work!!
Nice opening! I'm very curious to find out what creature that was. Looking forward to next week's snippet.
Hooking :) I like action packed beginnings.Keep it coming.PS I love the name Xander :)
Definitely hooked me! I'm completely curious now:)
Hooked! Now I want to know what happens next! Great job :)
Good ch 1 start! Action in the beginning is always wise imho.
ReplyDeleteExactly what I thought--what was that? :) Nice work!!
ReplyDeleteNice opening! I'm very curious to find out what creature that was. Looking forward to next week's snippet.
ReplyDeleteHooking :) I like action packed beginnings.
ReplyDeleteKeep it coming.
PS I love the name Xander :)
Definitely hooked me! I'm completely curious now:)
ReplyDeleteHooked! Now I want to know what happens next! Great job :)
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