Tuesday, September 29, 2009

It's Tuesday!

I just realized it is Tuesday. I suppose you would like a teaser today, wouldn't you?

This is from Chapter One:


* Removed, thank you to all who read and commented :) *

6 comments:

  1. Good ch 1 start! Action in the beginning is always wise imho.

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  2. Exactly what I thought--what was that? :) Nice work!!

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  3. Nice opening! I'm very curious to find out what creature that was. Looking forward to next week's snippet.

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  4. Hooking :) I like action packed beginnings.
    Keep it coming.

    PS I love the name Xander :)

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  5. Definitely hooked me! I'm completely curious now:)

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  6. Hooked! Now I want to know what happens next! Great job :)

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