Yet another Tuesday where my teaser is from an earlier chapter. This snip is from Chapter 5. Seryn, Xander, and Clay are walking to Esterial, attempting to race the darkness to get to Esterial (an old church) before creatures that thrive in the darkness can get to them.
**Snipped** Thank you for all the comments.
I like the action here. I was on the edge of my seat, biting my nails, and hoping that they would make it away from those creatures. Good job!
ReplyDeleteCreepy and tense. Love the descriptions of sunset and the swarm.
ReplyDeleteGood chase scene!!
ReplyDeleteDude, this was intense! :D
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I love the name Xander. Makes me think of the movie XXX with Vin Diesel. I <33 Vin Diesel.
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OOh, man, very intense. I like how it's all peaceful at the start, and then it totally gets action packed and pumping.
ReplyDeleteAnd I agree with Bex that Xander is an awesome name! LOL
Intense! I like it a lot.
ReplyDeleteGreat action!
ReplyDeleteFirst, love the name Xander (Buffy fan here, though I imagine your Xander is way hotter). Very intense scene. Love the action!
ReplyDeleteVery intense! Does they get away?
ReplyDeleteGorgeous decriptions of their surrounds, and i love the anxiousness... the intensity... Want to know more!
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