So, out of boredom, I decided to place what I have completed of my first draft into http://www.wordle.net/ and it generated a word cloud. I most definitely had an issue in the first few chapters with over describing eye movement... a lot of that junk will be cut out in my first full edit sweep. My character names are HUGE, meaning I've used them the most in my manuscript. I will be looking into ways to cut down the name usage. Besides the overdescription of eye/ head movement, and overusing names, I think the word usage is pretty balanced thus far.
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